When I read this selection I was just amazed at how clear the author was able to describe the things she saw. I was amazed at how she found a way to make so easy for me to picture in my mind what she had seen. The details in her descriptions we specific and numerous but not confusing. She was able to arrange her thoughts in a way that was easy to follow, easy to grasp. I could learn a lot from how she describes things and how she makes things so clear.
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